Shahzaib, your blog is developing with some promise with 27 posts at the time of marking, and you have increased your mark into level 3, which is pleasing - well done! Please read through the feedback below and complete the to do / targets list at the bottom of the page.
strengths:
- mostly up to date
- previously missing research posts now completed
- ideas and evidence clearly communicated to show care in presentation of ideas
weaknesses:
- time management not very frequency - approximately once or twice weekly
- detail in the posts isn't always consistent so some are detailed and reflective whereas others are less so
- use of ICT - could use a greater range of ICT and digital apps to present ideas rather than rely on text and embedded images or screenshots
TO DO / targets for completion:
1. improve frequency of posting - aim for 4 times weekly (2 lessons and 2 homeworks)
2. aim to provide detail in ALL your posts - reflect on the usefulness and value of the tasks you are working on - what have you learned from them and how can they help you develop your title sequence ideas?
3. be creative and experiment with a greater range of ICT to present your ideas visually rather than typing directly into a post
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