Pitch evaluation

The main pieces of feedback from our pitch is that I need to add the credit titles to the storyboard and add more detail to the audience profile.

Feedback for the pitch tasks:
Task 5: I needed to add more reasoning for why I chose the age group. I ended up changing the age group to younger adults.
Task 7: I need to get photos of the costumes that the investigator and murderer are going to wear during the shoot.
Task 8: I will have to make the water sound more like a canal or have no water sound effect at all. For the music we are possibly going to add a suspenseful score in the background to add to the thriller feel. We are going to uses ambient sounds whenever the murderer is in the shot to make it feel like there is something not quiet right about the character.
Task 10: Credit titles need to be added to the storyboard. We are going to do more establishing shots at the beginning of the film and also try to experiment with showing the murderer in a more abstract way by using canted angles.